What is it about girls not drinking beer these days? I recently went into a one of my favorite lunch spots a few days ago and ordered a salad. I was having a particularly hard day so I thought why not order a beer. I mean yes, I was by myself, but the looks that I was getting from the waitresses on the floor were hysterical. You would have sworn that I didn’t have pants on or something! I guess there are the logistics…beer does have a ton of calories and is very filling but c’mon girls! Get with it! A brew once in a while, will not, I repeat, will not, expand your slimming waste-line. And a word of advice to the want to be models at a restaurant that I won’t mention, (also known as Coffee Shop on 16th and Union) if I were you I would shy away from giving “eyes” to customers…it’s certainly not the best way to earn your tips. I feel like the only time I see a girl with a beer these days is if she’s in lingerie, drenched in some sort of liquid, and being paid to hold a bottle. This needs to change!
I like this - both the energy of your writing and the topic. But you need to go deeper. Try not to just scratch the surface but actually plumb the depths. You always need to justify why a reader would spend the time to read something you've written. What do they learn from it?
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